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(Hoo boy. I haven’t had my coffee yet this morning, but I think I’m awake now. How ’bout you?)<\/p>\n
My oldest child screamed as a baby. A LOT. No, I mean really. People say that about their kids, but I mean to tell you it was for no discernible reason and at all times<\/em>. To the notion of the \u201cwitching hour,” or babies crying for the same period of time every day in the early evening, she gave the middle finger and said she could do it way<\/em> better and longer. Unless mama was holding her. If not, she was taking it out on the world somethin’ fierce. It’s like she created her own kind of whacked-out colic — to some kind of pathological degree, or so it seemed at that time. (Dr. William Sears has a name for this<\/a><\/strong>, which comes closer to anything else I’ve ever read and rather saved me at that time, and for that reason, I will hug that man’s neck if I ever meet him. But I digress — and remarkably so.) <\/p>\n Pictured above in that invigorating illustration is Holler Loudly. He would have put my screamin’ wee babe to the test. Not to mention his tall-tale adventure is much<\/em> funnier. <\/p>\n <\/p>\n This all comes from Cynthia Leitich Smith’s<\/a><\/strong> new picture book, Holler Loudly<\/a><\/em><\/strong> (Dutton, November 2010), illustrated by Barry Gott<\/a><\/strong>. The story centers, naturally, on Holler, who cried so loud when he was born that “every hound dog in the county rolled up his ears and tossed back his head to bay,” not to mention “the armadillos woke from their naps and the turkey vultures dropped their feathers.” At every turn, he was told to hush, but he couldn’t: Every few generations this just happens to the poor Loudly family. <\/p>\n As you can see below in the illustrations Barry shares this morning (he’s also showing some early sketches from the book), Holler loves school, going to the movies, fishing, the state fair, and much more, but he’s simply too loud where ever he goes. He is finally able to hush himself, though I won’t give the whole story away, and—seeing as how this is a rip-roarin’ contemporary tall tale—he also saves the day, becoming a hero with the one thing that slowed him down to begin with. <\/p>\n Cynthia—the New York Times<\/em> and Publishers Weekly<\/em> best-selling author of Eternal<\/a><\/strong><\/em> and Tantalize<\/a><\/strong><\/em>, award-winning author for younger children (Jingle Dancer<\/a><\/strong>, Indian Shoes<\/a><\/strong>, and Rain Is Not My Indian Name<\/a><\/strong>), and faculty member at the Vermont College M.F.A. program in Writing for Children and Young Adults<\/a><\/strong>—is here this morning to talk a bit about the evolution of this story. She discusses how she started with a book not-so kid-friendly but how she managed to get there after all. Having heard from teacher- and librarian-friends in the field (who are with more than the same two children every day, as I currently am), I’d say she’s succeeded. I hear it’s a sure-fire hit with the wee ones (and is with my own). Publishers Weekly<\/em>, in their starred review, praises its “sass aplenty,” its “prose as raucous as its protagonist,” and not only Barry’s “funky, hyperbolic” cartoon art work, but also the interplay between text and art. <\/p>\n And, at its heart, this is a book about what it feels like to be misunderstood. I have a special place in my heart for misfits. Both author and illustrator tell this particular misfit’s tale with warmth, humor, and spunk. <\/p>\n Thanks to Cynthia for stopping by. For fans, note that she says: “At the moment, I\u2019m busy working on books for teens\u2014novels and graphic novels. I must say, though, that having a background in picture books and traditional prose novel writing has been a huge help to me in diving into the graphic format.”<\/p>\n {Note: You can click on most of the spreads and sketches below to super-size and see in more detail. These are all final spreads from the book, as well as sketches from Barry.}<\/em><\/p>\n It took six years\u2014with long pauses\u2014to get it right. Two or three times, I gave up on the manuscript completely.<\/p>\n The original title was Hush<\/em>, and the story was a realistic, contemporary one. My initial concept was that a boy nicknamed “Hush” simply wanted to be heard, but all of the grown-ups in his life kept telling him to be quiet. <\/p>\n In that earliest draft, Hush was saddened by the closing of the old theater and the public library, which had become too small for the growing community. He saved the day at a town meeting by suggesting that the library be relocated to the theater building. It also turned out that Hush\u2019s real name was \u201cHoller Loudly,\u201d and the townsfolk decided to name that new library building after him.<\/p>\n It had some elements going for it. The story was character-driven. The hero had a clear want, and he solved the problem. But it was also too predictable and not kid-friendly enough. I\u2019d probably attended too many city\/county council meetings as a news reporter. Recalling that experience likely distanced me from the young reader point-of-view.<\/p>\n A couple of months later, Kathi Appelt<\/a><\/strong> took a look at the story and offered some helpful notes. Kathi is my dear friend, colleague on the Vermont College of Fine Arts<\/a><\/strong> (VCFA) MFA faculty, and my original children\u2019s writing teacher. <\/p>\n With her guidance, the story\u2019s finale shifted to the town square and involved Holler taking ownership of his own name and suggesting the library move. It was a definite improvement, but the stakes\u2014though they would affect children\u2014still felt too adult.<\/p>\n In 2004, I did a revision for editor Paula Wiseman. Though she ultimately passed on the book, Paula suggested heightening the voice and centering Holler\u2019s journey on a few locations (the movie theater, the school, the fishing hole, and finally, the state fair) before he went to hear Gramps and Gramps\u2019 cat, Gus, sing in their barbershop quartet. <\/p>\n In this re-imagined version, the town is still significant (almost a character unto itself), but there are no city services\/historical preservation issues. <\/p>\n Also, it was Paula who suggested that I underscore the love that Mama and Daddy Loudly have for Holler, even when they themselves have totally lost patience with him.<\/p>\n Paula\u2019s comments had a huge impact, and some of her suggested language survived to the final book. About this time, the story was called Holler: A Very Loud Boy<\/em>.<\/p>\n I was stymied. But that summer I attended a “special day” on the picture book at VCFA. Editor Melanie Kroupa<\/a><\/strong> spoke about various manuscripts that she\u2019d acquired of late and focused for a while on the tall-tale tradition. I can\u2019t tell you what it was exactly that Melanie said, but I was already scribbling my revision before she finished talking. <\/p>\n Being loud came naturally to Holler, I realized. Every few generations a Loudly baby was just born loud, and Holler had been a lucky one! <\/p>\n And he wasn\u2019t just loud! He was so LOUD that the pecans fell from the pecan trees and the prickly pear cacti sprouted more needles. So LOUD that every hound dog in the county rolled up his ears and tossed back his head to bay. <\/p>\n He was a tall-tale hero! A legend in his own time! He needed a bigger, bolder, BADDER adversary than just a handful of scolding adults, and thus was born the sassy tornado!<\/p>\n It took a few more tweaks, but my final electronic draft of the story is dated July 2007. That wasn\u2019t the true end of my involvement of course, given the production process. <\/p>\n But those are the bold strokes that got Holler to where he is today. At least from an author\u2019s point-of-view.<\/p>\n I\u2019m hugely appreciative to all of the readers mentioned above, plus my critique group at that time (Anne Bustard<\/a><\/strong>, Sean Petrie, Tim Crow, and Greg Leitich Smith<\/a><\/strong>), as well as editor Maureen Sullivan, formerly of Dutton, who took over after Mark left the company (he\u2019s now a literary agent<\/a><\/strong>), and editorial assistant Andrew Harwell, who stepped up to usher Holler Loudly<\/em> (Dutton, 2010) out the gate.<\/p>\n But most of all, I\u2019d like to cheer illustrator Barry Gott<\/a><\/strong>, who brought so much energy, texture, and, well, VOLUME to Holler\u2019s story. I love the folksy humor in his art, the mini character arcs added in the illustrations, and the emotions he evokes. <\/p>\n Mama and Daddy\u2019s expressions stand out most to me, maybe because I share their mixed parenting feels toward this very expressive young character. <\/p>\n Of COURSE she is! But until Barry showed me, I had no idea.<\/p>\n Thanks to Cynthia for visiting. She tells me that the book is dedicated to her first childhood public library in Grandview, Missouri, and her current public library in Austin, Texas. <\/p>\n For more information on Cynthia, visit her website<\/a><\/strong>, named one of the top 10 Writer Sites on the Internet by Writer’s Digest<\/em> and an ALA Great Website for Kids. Her Cynsations<\/a><\/strong><\/em> blog was listed as among the top two read by the children’s\/YA publishing community in the SCBWI “To Market” column.<\/p>\n Barry’s website is here<\/a><\/strong>, and his “sketchedybook”\/blog is here<\/a><\/strong>. Enjoy. <\/p>\n<\/a>
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The next major event was a revision request from Mark McVeigh<\/a><\/strong> at Dutton in early 2006. Mark had been my editor on Santa Knows<\/a><\/strong><\/em>, co-authored by Greg Leitich Smith<\/a><\/strong>, illustrated by Steve Bjorkman<\/a><\/strong>. Mark wanted an explanation as to why Holler was so loud, and he wanted a much bigger resolution. <\/p>\n<\/a>
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And I simply adore Miz Poofy, who\u2019s mentioned in the story and shown repeatedly in the illustrations. You\u2019ll recall that a public library was at the heart of the first draft, and I brought it back in\u2014with a twist\u2014to the final one. I\u2019ll never forget turning to that last page and shouting, \u201cMiz Poofy is the librarian! Miz Poofy is the librarian!\u201d<\/p>\n